I want to be a voodoo doll
having so much pain in my life
but yet don't feel it at all
watching other people bleed
with no reason only i know why
they wonder why they are in pain
they threw me on top of the shelf
I shall give no warning
for the next time I strike
sitting there with my button eye's
and my sowed on arm
with a pin sticking out of my head
and stuffing over flowing out of my leg
why don't you play with me
I hate bring all this pain to you
but yet I feel nothing.
A contest entry
- Instead of a Human... by Rianna Bear.
600 points, ended April 17, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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pessimism at its best. that was a really cool idea: a voo doo doll. i would've never come up w/that one! the best part about being one, never feeling the pain. it kind of reminds me of when i watch scary movies; would i rather be the bad guy chasing (which kinda sucks), or be the scared sh#*less victim running for their lives (which sucks even more!). you know? cool, though! thanks for sharing and for your entry!
*Rianna
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edit line seven to me not my. good poem and you incorporated some rhyme and some flow more than usual, very creative poem. I love it. Like I said you are more of a dark writer dealing with pain, sadness, and hurt. <3 love you. It is an outstanding write babycakes.
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