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My life's Heart

Upon my dreams, I will see,
what my heart holds true to me.
But among the darkness in my
heart, it shrouds my mind and tore
me apart.
Through others eyes all they see,
is what they judge and who
they be.
But through my eyes, I see more.
Beauty, talent, and so much more.
Out in the open, my figure
stays cold.
But on the inside, there's more
to unfold.
I dance and sing to the song
of silence.
Where humans are the instuments,
and life is the stage.
Dream or reality...
As life goes on, this is
my insanity.

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  • ElvishWind
    May 3, 2008
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    WOOOOOOOOOOAAAAA!!!!!

    Holy cow Sara-chan! That's freaking awesome! I liked the

    "Out in the open, my figure
    stays cold.
    But on the inside there's more to unfold."

    Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more poems from you!

    ~Ariah/Elena