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Rock Bottom

I began dissolving in my salty tears

That had been there for days

Ever since you shattered my heart

I have stayed here

Alone in this dreary place

How could you do this

Leave me alone to disappear

Leave my for insanity to devour

This hellish place

Where death is visible

Why

 

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    Its sad

    But very well written with such feelings good write


  • Blooming Poet
    April 4, 2008

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    This is rock bottom indeed. Great take on one of the many prompts I gave you. Loved this part:

    began dissolving in my salty tears

    That had been there for days

    Ever since you shattered my heart


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    oh sweetie this is such a heartfelt piece and it reflects emotions that I am sure so many feel and have been through am always here for you