Your Fangs caress me
Releasing a strange energy inside of me.
I gasp for air not there.
I reach for safety too far away.
They pierce the softness of my neck
And my mind screams
as my body craves.
My systems cry for relief
as I lean into the pain.
You release to soon
and leave me wanting.
My eyes open to the empty room,
The shades drawn
and the sun peeking around them.
I take a breath
and find it to be there.
My safety I find
in the man next to me.
Author notes
So it may seem a little nightmarish to some people, but it really isn't and I don't mean it to be.
A contest entry
- Sweet Dreams by Cerulean Sunrise.
1000 points, ended April 17, 2008, 17 entries
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Not nightmarish to me... at all. nice
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..sorry, i had tried to condense it but every time i tried it lost something, I wasn't sure if the extra 3 lines would matter much, but thank you anyway
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That's ok. I gave up on the line limit.
Changed rules on contest page.
Be Well
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I don't really think it's a nightmare though it sent chills up and down my spine but in a good way... you did really good in how you worded the detail of the emotion. GREAT JOB
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hehee, theres a difference with this though, you know me aw too well, mi amore, so you know it isn't a nightmare. ^^;; that sounds like we're lovers huh...
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