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Strength

I must not give up,
what I know we have.
We will make it through all the,
pain and sorrow.
I will not give up on what we have,
It's much to strong to throw away,
with the simple flick of my wrist.
Please,
Don't give up on me,
on us.
I will make it up to you,
prove my love,
prove its strength.
Nothing will break us apart.
I love you Mac.

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ok this is dedicated to my fiance....its personal.

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  • OhNoChastity
    April 5, 2008

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    This poem is sweet, but unfortunately I'm going to have to look over it. I don't know what prompt you used.