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kill it

Alright so it happened
Big deal
Keep me away from it
And shoot the whole thing

Or maybe don’t
Since that got us
All in trouble
In the first place

Author notes

the thing with alissa.
hoppe you likked.

mkay randommm...good?

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  • xhappygirlforeverx
    April 7, 2008

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    i like the last stanza ahlot. 'or maybe dontsince that got us All in troublein the first place' i like itt


  • eronrox
    April 2, 2008

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    dude
    getting it makes it better =p
    i like it
    its so short and smiley perfect
    when drama happens you normally can't write about it
    but you did it.
    whoaa.


  • Clarabelll
    April 2, 2008
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    I love it!


  • eronrox
    April 2, 2008
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    thing with alissa?
    haven't heard about ittt
    fill mee innn =]
    uh. its good.
    i likethe second stanza

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