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Should We Ever Have Tried at All?


Words, bah,
here they lie,
at rest upon my brow,
they do not mean anything, they affect nothing…

Days, weeks, months have passed
in deathlike contemplation,
did words actually have an effect, I wonder…

Christina was here name,
here sent upon an angel’s breath, perhaps,
reaching lofty moments with her artful prose
inscribed indelibly upon this hidden heart…
should I pretend that I do not know
the cause of her long absence...
it is obvious- the need for love,
no one can survive without it,
absence is a terrible void…

Long I was away, too long, maybe,
on a holiday;
sending no postcards, not a word,
earning my rejection...

I was exhausted…

We seek understanding when we return,
only to find cold strangers
numbed of all emotion,
desperation ensues, then breakdown;
even the strongest of us lose,
regretting existence; should we ever have tried at all
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  • Ryno
    April 5, 2008

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    Christina is a great friend to me, on MSN. So even when she disppeared from the site I still got to talk to her for hours and hours on MSN

    Seems as though you missed her or her poetry or both...

    I heard about the incident where you connected my former name with what was on her page - I died laughing

    There is an underlying beauty and strong emotion that comes from this piece; it is more then a dedication and it warms our heart but makes our feelings throb...

    Excellent! Thanks for the entry.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Well Christina didnt lose anything, Apparently I DID Ohh wois me...
    This was absolutely wonderful. Great job on this acrostic.

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    Passions