My perfect dream would have to be,
the one with me standing in my white dress,
across from him,
looking into his eyes,
seeing through teary eyes,
my future stand before me,
He slips my new ring,
on my ring finger,
happiness surrounds me,
feel like I'm floating on air,
then I hear a phone in the distance,
and wake up to realize,
it was only a dream.
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Never give up on your dreams; dreams are what make life bearable
Besides, you never know when dreams just may come true
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wow
This was very well written and worded so great. I could picture everything as i read. This was a really cute poem tho. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
for you.
xxx..<3..
Shelly -
this is a great write =]
good luck in my contest -
awwww
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