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Tonight

I close my eyes
As you arrive
And we pass the night together.
In the dark of night,
In the still warm air,
finally we are together.
sharing a kiss, an embrace;
sharing our warmth, our skin;
sharing our souls, our love;
finally we are together--
but only for tonight.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    Damn.... only for tonight?

    Lovely.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Sweet,

    This is a very well penned piece/
    Thanks for sharing, all the best within the contest.

    Peace.. Timothy aka poeticweaver