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Sweet Dreams

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Stranded on an island,

you come rescue me.

Not caring how you got there,

removing your clothes are my only thoughts.


With gentle caresses, and passionate kisses,

I no longer worry about leaving.

You gently lay me on the sand,

kissing your way to my treasure.


With slow gentle licks,


bringing me to the brink.

As I'm about to explode in ectasy,

I wonder why I'm hearing a beeping sound!?


"7:45! Shit! I've over slept!"

I'll have to wait another 12 hours,


before returning back to Pleasure Island.

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    August 1

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    Nice dream. Sometimes they make us feel we are living them till we wake up...Sweet return to your Pleasure Island..Thats a kicker way to end your pome!

    return the favor


  • PhantomsAngel87 gold member
    May 24
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    You have a skill with hot erotic writes hun



  • markgrif gold member
    April 10

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    Love the ending.

    Sweet dreams

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 2

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    Well gosh... I wanna have your dreams!! That had such a languid sensuality to it hun.. love it!!! You do erotic and sensual so well!!


  • Lucy. gold member
    April 2
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    ha haa. Good one, didn't see that end coming. Don't you hate that! Good luck in the contest.


  • TizMoi
    April 1

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    Very well written indeed, sure we've all had nights like these, oh that blasted alarm! Good luck in contest

  • almostgone
    April 1

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    ooo this is hot! nice little wake up while im at work. this is a great poem here. Excellent job with the prompt. Good luck with this one!

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