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Appetizers (with Dinner to Cum)

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Her: Tie me up and make me your whore!

 

Ted: I know this sounds cliche'

but I could never see you that way

for you are the one I always adore!

 

Her: I want you to spank me

and play with me hard and rough!

 

Ted: I will pat your ass and will be gentle

as we will stand up and make beautiful love.

 

Her: I want you to stroke me fast

like you're a silver bullit train!

 

Ted: You will feel my passion throbing

causing you to be erotic drops of rain.

 

Her: Then melt me like chocolate

and taste the candy with your smooth tongue.

 

Ted: You will be my hershey syrup

and I will lick you wherever you run.

 

Her: Then cut the ropes loose

and let me sit on top.

 

Ted: Your suggestion will come true

as my thrusting won't seem to stop.

 

Her: Then roll me over and stick my legs in the air.

 

Ted: You don't have to tell me twice as I'm already there.

 

Her: Then I will get on all fours

as you take me from behind.

 

Ted: I will treat you like my sweet pet

and will make sure you stay in line.

 

Her: Once we do all that,

I will think of other things to do.

 

 

Ted: I'm sure all those were appetizers

as I know the main course is being prepared by you!

Author notes

inspired by this picture:

#5

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/Anstorm/Sensual_masochism.png

Done this quite different than I usually write. Wanted it to be like a conversation between the two people with a tad of humor with their passion.

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Comments

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  • zhaniswolf
    May 21, 2008

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    I could've sworn I read this already and commented... Oh well, I got the erotic sense again. Of course, you know I'm starting to see these poems with different eyes. Great job. Sorry if there's any typos... my computer screen is foggy for some reason... lol. Love you, my dear.

    The Z Wolf


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      June 1, 2008
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      Glad you enjoyed it and may your screen continue to get foggy from my erotica(lol)


  • goddesskevauna
    April 5, 2008

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    Kinky!

    Kinky and just plain erotic! Mmmm! That is a delicious appetizer! Now although you've written this as a contest entry. I'd like to know what the main course they will be having!

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      June 1, 2008
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      Loved your comment and will have to work on the main course. Sorry I couldn't fill in the stars for I so wanted to with such a great comment


  • SageSyren
    April 4, 2008

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    Only a bronze for this? Wow, though. I know I said I was going to read the rain poems, but the title caught my eye and I just couldn't pass it up.

    I loved this and wonder if that conversation could happen here today with the hubby? Hmmmmmm will have to see what I can do Thanks for the inspiration
    Brooke

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      April 4, 2008
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      Brooke, thank you for your enthusiasm and I wasn't sure if I would even get a trophy with this one. There was quite a bit of competition so I feel lucky. You may want to read "Lustful" if you truly want some inspiration. I think it took silver and I do have several erotic pieces that took gold that you may likeTed E


  • h1ybear
    April 3, 2008
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    My computer is steaming up. Makes it real hard to read the screen


  • HakuoBlake
    April 2, 2008
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    OmG. This is erotic and funny somehow. And it rhymes too! (a bonus) awesome poem


  • ennovy silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    Uniquely Erotic

    Wow! this one is such a heated piece of work. I love the way you approached this with your own style. Very intresting and sexy....write ON!...Novy


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      April 1, 2008
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      Novy, thank you for all of your encouragement and sweet commentTed E


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 1, 2008

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    Yummmmm- E!

    I can feel the screen sizzling ... gonna have to perform CPR on the computer in a minute

    Hot and different for you, you penned this wonderfully! Enjoy it

    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    Love you
    ~Manda


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      April 1, 2008
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      Amanda, thank you for such a super wonderful comment for I truly appreciate itTed E

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