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and again...

Shattered glass...

and here i am
driving aimlessly, carelessly
unable to see
(not that it matters)
these fucking memories
still images
crowding my lonely mind
and i might have walked a mile
if i thought i knew your heart
but i'm left wasted
and it hurts
it hurts so fucking bad
i just hope you walk brave
with your head held high
just as you burn
and kill everything inside...

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  • Despairkitty
    June 18, 2008

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    Honey I have missed you and I have most certainly missed reading your heartbreaking poetry. This was magnificent and so lonely so sad. I hope you are well. I am so sorry I have been away.
    Despair


  • Whyitt U
    April 3, 2008

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    Jeez...this is powerful and sad. "and i might have walked a mile, if i thought i knew your heart"...that's an amazing phrase and this is a wonderful write...I have missed you...Hope all is well.

    Wyatt xxx


  • Serene
    April 2, 2008

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    wow, emotions intense, yet behind a wheel! expressed this well dear! huggies


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Wow,

    Such an intense read, really captivating content.
    Thanks for sharing, and pen on poet.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver