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sucks(just a draft)

My love I put
in those I trust
helps me clean
my heart of rust

It's been so long
I hope I'll know
If it's true
Please don't go

Another loss
could kill my pride
Just more lust
to set aside

You'll never know
what I've given up
I'll never know
if I've filled my cup

Will it spill over
god I hope so
but, I fear
that will be a no

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This really sucks. It's just a rough draft though. I wanted to get a thought out there so I wouldn't forget it...

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