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Peaches and Cream {HM }

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Simultaneous tones
Blending motions
Whipped desires

waltzed  

Dancing rhythm to their lustful beat

Heightened pleasure

Intensifies a touch

Tastes of delight

Sweetening fruits bare

Revealing secrets of innocence

Lost to the passions

That night  

 

 

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Harmony

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  • GentleGiant
    April 8
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    looking at the prompt I feel like rubbing myself down with a bar of soap

  • Manoj Sanyal
    April 5

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    You have taken the prompt in sensual level... well penned.
    Best wishes and good luck.

    • Reptile Lady gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you for the HM
      Best wishes and thank you for hosting this contest
      Julie

  • Abe 1
    April 4
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    wowza tasty 1
    angel delight luv it
    gd luck in de contest
    abe


  • Mallig gold member
    April 2

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    This really is delicious! Such a wonderful write, beautiful language and sensation. Best of luck with this!

  • What a wild picture and what a sensual write--Well Done
    --best of luck to you in the contest!!


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    April 2

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    wow

    What a fantastic take on the prompt, you weave such a great story with such vivid images in so few words here... just amazing... good luck in the contest

  • oh my goodness hun... very sensual indeed!! That just pulsates with desire! I love it!!


  • aboomer silver member
    April 1

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    Sensuous and just lovely! Wonderful wording that goes so well with that picture.
    Beautiful!
    best wishes in your contest.


  • poppa silver member
    April 1

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    Wonderful write with just the right mixture of love and passion....good luck in your contest

    Rob..

  • I have to say, I saw the title, and then the picture, and I just grinned. "Sweetening fruits bare" probably my favorite line. I loved the vivid imagery of this piece and your natural sensual style comes out quite well. Once again your piece is hot and powerful. Keep up the good work!


  • jcat gold member
    April 1

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    Just beautiful!!! But what else could I expect from you?? You took my breath away and captivated my soul! Excellent job.....


  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    April 1

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    I loved the use of motion in this sensuous ballad of sweetened arousal. Your words each whittle passions, rendering carved explosions of perfection. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1

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    Wow,

    A very wonderfully inscribed entry here poetess.
    Thanks for sharing here, and I enjoyed reading you.
    All the best within the contest. Peace.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver

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