Simultaneous tones
Blending motions
Whipped desires
waltzed
Dancing rhythm to their lustful beat
Heightened pleasure
Intensifies a touch
Tastes of delight
Sweetening fruits bare
Revealing secrets of innocence
Lost to the passions
That night
Author notes
Harmony
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE with predecided winners on mutual admiration... please enter if you dare. by Manoj Sanyal.
360 points, ended April 5, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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looking at the prompt I feel like rubbing myself down with a bar of soap
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You have taken the prompt in sensual level... well penned.
Best wishes and good luck.
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Thank you for the HM
Best wishes and thank you for hosting this contest
Julie
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wowza tasty 1
angel delight luv it
gd luck in de contest
abe
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This really is delicious! Such a wonderful write, beautiful language and sensation. Best of luck with this!
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What a wild picture and what a sensual write--Well Done
--best of luck to you in the contest!!
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wow
What a fantastic take on the prompt, you weave such a great story with such vivid images in so few words here... just amazing... good luck in the contest
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oh my goodness hun... very sensual indeed!! That just pulsates with desire! I love it!!
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Sensuous and just lovely! Wonderful wording that goes so well with that picture.
Beautiful!
best wishes in your contest.
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Wonderful write with just the right mixture of love and passion....good luck in your contest
Rob..
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I have to say, I saw the title, and then the picture, and I just grinned. "Sweetening fruits bare" probably my favorite line. I loved the vivid imagery of this piece and your natural sensual style comes out quite well. Once again your piece is hot and powerful. Keep up the good work!
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Just beautiful!!! But what else could I expect from you?? You took my breath away and captivated my soul! Excellent job.....
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I loved the use of motion in this sensuous ballad of sweetened arousal. Your words each whittle passions, rendering carved explosions of perfection. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Wow,
A very wonderfully inscribed entry here poetess.
Thanks for sharing here, and I enjoyed reading you.
All the best within the contest. Peace.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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