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Love Unknown

My love for him goes unknown
  My love for him grows
  I sit at home all day long alone
    I wish some days i wish i compose
      for him i sing i bout him every day and he never knows
        For he is my Love Unknown to all

  I tell my friends every thing but my love for this one goes unkown
    I disclose my feelings to my stuff animals so they are my all-knowing friends they
    know all my feelings are know to none



SO My unloving love for You my sweet Bradley or maybe not i'm noe telling

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Well expressed piece, to the poetic point.
    Keep that ink flowing, and thanks for sharing here.


    -Timothy aka poeticweaver