enthused by the beatbox vibrations
bad times melt away
to good sensations
the world, a dull monotone gray
burst suddenly into bright carnations
floating by the waves of sound
they touch you, feel you
all around
the treble red, the bass blue
you see the notes, bright and round
when the sounds show their vibrant hue
caught there, betwixt and between
not here nor there, per-se
the treble now orange, the bass now green
wishing it never to fade away
the music stops, reality is now seen
the color stops, the world is back to gray
A contest entry
- Profundity-Think Like You've Never Thunk Before!!! by aslanlight.
600 points, ended April 22, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh yes this is brilliant and captures how I feel about music, everything comes alive in a magnificent spectrum of colour, though I hadn't thought of notes as colours before. Excellent, you thought of something I haven't thought, which is exactly what I asked you to do!
Georgia
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Youe bass is smooth as butter
and your sax cuts like a knife...
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well your your vocabulary is vibrant as well...very descriptive....
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This was enjoyable to read... I really liked it.
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Wow, hon. That totally took me away... Amazing...
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