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my life is just the start

When I woke up time stood still, I am never asleep, 
I stay up, my life is jumping up and down.
How can I lay down knowing I have done wrong?
We are all awake not asleep, so we never sleep. 

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 1, 2008

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    very intense little poem for so few words or lines. very well penned. it brings up a lot of ?????????? we all want answered and I don't think we will ever have answered

    • Toons
      April 1, 2008
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      Thats what I tried to do, thank you!