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''writer's block''

''writer's block''

searching my mind's allocated shelf
sitting quiescent, swirling thoughts incessant;
to my thoughts i implore, wring something from thyself;
the night is evanescent!

sun's retiring light, star's bleak light, incipient twilight
sifting the myriad thoughts of my mind
restlessly still, shirt's ruffled frill, hand clutching quill..
i muttered silently; ah the thought's grind!

spinning erratic imagination, i bid the pen's point to its destination;
edge of frustration, verge of vexation, brink of irritation.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 2, 2008

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    taciturn69

    Great write Good luck with it in the contest Thanks for the comment


  • Bull3t2b1n0ry
    April 2, 2008
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    wow I am blown away by your vocabulary good job and good luck another very interesting entry thanks


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Wow,

    So much for writer's block eh? LOL.
    This piece looks good to me, well expressed and penned.
    Thanks for sharing, and keep that ink flowing.

    peace.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver