How far deep are the deepest depths of love?
Where does it end? how does it begin?
Is it something in the skin?
Or does it depends on what state of mind your in?
or maybe you have to really examine it
to know it's starting point and it's ending point
I think we don't really think about how deep love is
How the Lord is the only one that can measure
How deep your love goes
When judgement comes then you will know
exactly how much you loved
Then you'll know how many people were truly loved by you and
how much you were really loved
If the love you thought was real
was what you thought it was
or were you living a lie
The ultimate love
is the one that comes from God
He has the purest love available for all mankind
something you can't buy cause it's devine...
God loves you all the time
A contest entry
- Profundity-Think Like You've Never Thunk Before!!! by aslanlight.
600 points, ended April 22, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my thoughts
Comments
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Are you aware of the Bee Gees song 'How Deep is your Love?' If you were and borrowed the title from them you ought to have credited them in your author's comments but perhaps you didn't. You give an impression of the mysterious nature of love; that it's something we'll never fully understand, well at least while we're on this earth. You've thought deeply and that's what I asked for, well done!
Peace Georgia
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Beautifully penned.
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on.
*PEACE*
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as always ur the best
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