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Run Away With Me

 

 

 

 

Darling take my hand

run away with me tonight

let's color this world with our love

break down every barrier

as we explore the world together

 

You have nothing to fear

I will always be by your side

protecting you through it all

I will cherish you always my love 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 4, 2008

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    its so sweet. amazing use of 50 words. That picture is so cute. I absolutly love this poem. Great work and congrats on the HM in the other contest and good luck in mine.


  • Butterfly24
    April 2, 2008

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    very nice... it reminded me of just getting away form every thing. so i enjoyed this pice. keep on writing.


  • jcat gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    A wonderfully romantic piece by you!!! You are such a romantic at heart and it shines through here!! Wonderful job and best of luck


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Who in their right mind could say no to your loving request.
    You have always amazed me with your short writes.
    I will never understand how you pack so much love into just a few words.
    Love your talent.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • jasminerose
    April 1, 2008

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    Awww this is so sweet and so beautifully uplifting to the heart my friend A wonderful take on the picture!
    I wish you all the best in the contest!
    Linda


  • Valley Girl silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    This is a fantastic write, Very touching and beautiful! Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the contest.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    A wonderful job as always my dear brother.. Thanks for sharing. I enjoy when I get the chance to see what writes your up to. Peace brother.

    -Timothy

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