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I Forget...

Missing image

Your presence so close to me as I reach out to touch

long for the taste of our forbidden love.

Everlasting scent of your body on mine

kisses, caresses, whispers, moments...

...and yet, in my confusion, I forget you died years ago.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    April 2, 2008

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    So many different emotions in this but the last like is like a punch in the stomach or a bad dream to me Thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


    • AngelicMistress gold member
      April 4, 2008

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      Hi:

      'Til next time friend.....
      Blessed be with love and light always.....
      AngelicMistress...Tanya


  • BluRosePoet8488
    April 2, 2008

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    WOW! This is so beautiful and loving. Then WHAM! It's like you get hit in the gut! Well written, my friend. Keep the in flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • Angelflower
    April 1, 2008

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    Oh wow.. This was so beautiful.. While reading this you would never expect it to end the way that it did.. This was a really great write.. The emotion in the words come forth very well..
    Great write..
    Peace to you, Jetleena


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Ouch..

    So beautiful, and it must of been a dream, that last line took me way off.. Happy, loving, then sad. Thanks for sharing. Wonderfully Inscribed piece my friend. All the best within the contest.

    -Timothy

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