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Night - Part II

You are my pillar, my foundation, my base,
without you I would just crumble.
I don't want to go back to the way it was before,
before I met you, I was in a jumble.

You are my sunshine, my ray of light,
when all is dark you manage to shine through.
You pull me up when I'm down and under,
I'm beginning to see life in a different view.

You are my knight in shining armour,
you are my saviour, my idol, my king.
But what am I to you, I wonder,
nobody, a girl, or your everything?

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Continuation of Night I, and before Night III which is the last one.

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  • Nakatrea
    April 2, 2008

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    *sigh* nice. pretty and cute. never really knew you had sucha poetry side.