watching and waiting for the clock to change time
While wishing secretly through these rhymes
I long for your hug and your sweet gentle kiss
ghod know how much of you that i continue to miss
Times will never change this feeling for you
I've told you that i love you all the way through
silently i sit to the unsuspecting family
Praying to God somehow they will see
Families not agianst but yet hold us back
Our future together will soon become a fact
Secretly we confide in our silent relation
Forever we will stand through life's aggravation
We made our silent oath of love
And our hearts are together forever above
Emotions are strong forever we are bound
I sit here and tell you I love you with out a sound
A modern day Romeo and Juliet is what we are
And we have already been given our horrible scars
But I will wait for you like I said I would
You nod in agreement to show you understood
I'll love you forever i promised you this
Into the journey of Love is what i enlist
Author notes
I know there is a few problems and im not done revising it yet. but overall what do you think
Timeless Eternity
A contest entry
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Comments
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I like it quite a bit it really paints a picture of young love forbidden. I felt like this many a times as a teen and this takes me back! Well done!
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A beautiful piece you penned here. Great job. In order to even be considered i need name and option number in author notes. Thanks and good luck,
passions
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This is very sweet =]
Ha. i like the part:
A modern day Romeo and Juliet is what we are
It's kind of cool
Great poem =D
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