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Nothing

Missing image
White lace
smiles
notices, yes
nothing

Quick little
touch
moves away
nothing

Romance
Mystery
Lost
Forgotten

Nothing

~vampira1665~

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Written December 8th, 2003

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  • Angel Of Red
    December 10, 2003
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    very thought provocing. I am probably reading it wrong, but to me your stanza

    "Romance
    Mystery
    Lost
    Forgotten"

    seems to suggest relationships in general, such as the quick surge of emotions and feelings, such as "romance" and "mystery", which eventually die down and you move on to be "lost" and "forgotten". But I'm nuts so maybe I'm reading too much into it... lol... lalalalalalala *bounce off walls and hit head into steel bar, leaving a dent in the bar while I go bounce on the bed* lol, don't mind me


  • demonwithin
    December 9, 2003
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    guilty

    interesting quite interesting


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 9, 2003
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    memories have a way of touching within that quiet exterior!
    Hmmm...
    you do have a way of touching within my mind!
    I did enjoy!
    Keep penning on my friend one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • December 8, 2003
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    mmmm, I love it. Great pic, I can feel the warmth of the desert and the comfort of the lap-friend... as to the nothing, it's a kind of natural state of being, I think, sometimes... watching those floating bits of dreams breaking apart like incense smoke... puts me in a pensive mood... nice write.

  • LostInThought
    December 8, 2003
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    Nice write Tish, much more sentimental than usual.


  • Desire gold member
    December 8, 2003
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    Jhirrad~YOU are a funny man~Oh yes you are and don't deny it
    Tiffany has a new name~Ane
    I say Anething; Anebody; Anewear
    She saw Star Wars and made Anekin(however you spell the name)And shortened it to make it her own~
    I rather have the Nothing...Not for short...Not a damn thing for today, tomorrow or the next day~Kapish!
    Smile before I paint one on your face like The Joker
    Big hugs and much love~Desire

  • Jhirrad
    December 8, 2003
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    Oh, that's really cool. Cleopatra, waiting for somebody there, with all of ancient Egypt sitting in the backdrop. And then the little romantic thoughts, drifting, floating. That is really nice. Good work.

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