You are my
perfect tragedy,
all broken down.
You are my atomic bomb,
you explode and the
world crumbles down.
You are my
continuious pain,
sadistic.
You are my perfect
love story,
unrealistic.
You are my
perfect tragedy
that I keep around...
you are my
heart, that
breaks me down...
Author notes
It's not really that personal but not really not emotionally connected to me... I'm not sure what to make of it. I suppose it's taking about a relationship. Give me your thoughts. The inspiration if any, "Over and Over" by Three Days Grace
A contest entry
- Love Poetry Please by FallingTwilight.
390 points, ended April 16, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment please...if you like it, if you don't. Please comment.
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Spell check, spell check, spell check. No matter how much potential a poem has, it will always seem juvenile when the poet has misspelled words. Poetry is about command of language. Every poet is in a constant state of improving their own ability to use language, and spelling is one of the most visible ways to demonstrate whether or not the poet has adequate control.
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Sorry
Gosh darn it...forgot I wasn't on my Firefox. it has an automatic spell check, thank you for commenting...
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