When I wake
I think of you,
Wishing I could turn to my side and see you sleeping there
When I dress
I think of you,
Wishing I have you here to look good for
When I eat
I think of you,
Wishing I could cook you your favorite dish
When I sing
I think of you,
Wishing I could somehow make you my song
When I am alone
I think of you,
Wishing you were with me to express our feelings
When I laugh
I think of you,
Wishing I could see your sweet smile
When I cry
I think of you,
Wishing I had your chest to cry into
When I pray to God
I think of you,
Wishing I could express all the gratitude I feel
When I am with you
I think of you,
Wishing for absolutely nothing more
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Very enjoyable, Its rough and i relate.
And its just really true.
Much respect thank you for this poem
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Very sweet, I love how you've written this poem. Well done. :
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this is a really great piece....I enjoyed reading it a lot
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i like it
im not really into the sappy love poems, this one worked out well, as an Army wife i understand that he's not going to be here for me every minute, so i need to appricate the time he is, i love that you put wishing for absolutely nothing more, that really ties all the wishes together this poem has a great flow, keep writing, -Amy
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i love you right back sweety
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thank you so much for the feedback. it helps to know i am not alone!
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I love you, miss Alter!
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