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I
The outside atmosphere has warmed to pleasing
The punks down the street are clattering their skateboards
And I am wishing for May in the
Most cliché way I can think of.

II
A small bird perches passionate red past the screen
If I could identify it, I would, I would –
Exactly what would I do?
Store it in my library of thoughts?
Beside the stockpile of photographs, yes.
I should photograph the creature
In all its red-hued glory;
But it has flown on its way
While I considered composition and lights.

III
The loud floral arrangement I am seated upon
Boasts of a feeling I’m wishing for
Excite me,
World.
Bring me my emotions
And deck me out in life.

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  • christalclear
    April 1, 2008

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    I think this is one of my favorites. Everything ties together so well and makes you think. The third stanza? is my favorite.

  • Raining Moon
    April 1, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I particulartly like II. Why is it untitled? Is is a couple of poems, or one artfuly disconnected poem?