holding time's reflection in surrounding aura
leaf pale once lavish in green
there we stood once hand to hand
under the shading tree
where our love touched the sky
and we set ourself free
in each other arms
holding each other looking eye to eye
the moment stored in the passing sunlight
lip to lip heart to heart
the warmness touched through our souls
blood rushing to our minds
blushed love flushed through our breath
bending time and space everything seems slow
each petal seems so delicately in love
the oceans swirling together forming tides
crashing each others madness on each others side
feeling your hand's warmness
the heart is in its coziest Conner
eyes opened and it seems like a beautiful dream
our presence marked and alibis stored
in this air in this vicinity
when we kissed !!
Author notes
black..
for your muse only:
andolence in its own bliss.
meloncholy melody.
lady rain ...gore in rose
A contest entry
- Waiting For My Kiss... A few Options by BeautifulFlame.
675 points, ended April 4, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Moment in Forever by Nephlim.
600 points, ended June 16, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me your interpretations
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hummz. A Free write. couldn't worked well.. it needed to be more specified .. but you did great work in speaking emotions and feelings. the touch of sensation was nice.
NO for The Judge
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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thanks for the applauds... sorry for being lil stupid. what needed to be more specified???
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This is so romantic and tender..you sure took me back to some great memories my friend..I like how you expressed yourself beautifuly in this piece..It sure much better than sad ones
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u really think its better than sad ones.. i dun know lately i am being too hard on my writes... it seems the worst critique of my work is me.
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yes better...write more like this
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Thank you for following the rules! =]
I love how sweet and tender every line in this poem was, fluidly spilling into the next line. You described a really beautiful moment with this. Good luck!
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Oooh sensual Kisses, havent had that in some time lol! I liked it brother, the second stanza was well described!
Cheers,
Kal
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.. u been busy, kinda miss u in ap
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Very sensual poem ..The feelings of love can be wonderful..great job my friend..and best of luck in the contest
Ruby
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