Forever tonight...

Even in the dark you warm my heart,
fill my body with your love
Expressing the giving kind
as I remember the touch of your hands…
making me feel so beautiful,
special and loved…
Feeding my deepest needs
the wanting,
the hunger…
Our nights together
passionate…

And as I lay here,
with closed eyes
thinking of you
...following your beauty
all the way down
only sweet feelings cross my mind
to have found you
just in time…

Now forever tonight can begin…

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A contest entry

My other half by Angelo di Luce. 400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Forever tonight can begin...

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Angelo di Luce
November 12, 2008
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Thank you for this beautiful write
Good luck in contest
Whispering Wind
August 20, 2008

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BREATH TAKING
such tender heart felt words of love, passion and need...pull a sigh right out of me thank you kind soul for sharing your beautiful with me
- Wolf Mistress
  August 21, 2008
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  Thank you Ann....now you know what is done here at nights
Poetic Tasha
June 1, 2008

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ooooh hun i really enjoyed this write, well done!

Tasha
dillpickle62
April 6, 2008
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Soft
This has a soft sound to it. Romantic even. I enjoyed this.
JeannieD Hunter
April 2, 2008

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I can certainly feel the love and emotion as well as passion in this write. Your words played like a movie in my mind. Very well written. I wish you much love and happiness
Ryno
April 2, 2008

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This was an interesting take on the prompt, or, the action for that matter, that was supposed to trigger you to write; I didn't really expect anyone to take it that way.

While there is a lot of raw emotion in here, I have to be honest and say that the phrasing and the images could've been more creative and gone more indepth to really make the reader feel and connect to the piece; one a level different then just a normal poem it feels like we read everyday.

Well done with portraying your feelings, but now the challenges is, can I feel Them?

Thanks for the entry.
Ethereal One
April 1, 2008

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Your words express well the love you feel for this person. It is so wonderful when we find a person that can make us feel this strong emotion.

I wish you the best in life....always.

Love & Hugs,
Jeannette