our first kiss
she leaned on my hair
it hurt but i did not move
looking back now
i see it a metaphor
for how we turned out to be
brings me pain
and yet i love her
the push and pull of it all
will i ever let go
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie: PIF 10/50 by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended April 2, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 946 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, with a contest of over 1300 entries you got hm, you should be real proud of yourself...
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Oh, this is great!!
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Such a sad write, your last line really spoke to me "will i ever let go", You'll forget your 2nd and 3rd loves, but never your first. Thank you for entering my contest, and best of luck.
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