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the Beauty In Paradise

HEART AND SOUL SONGS

THE BEAUTY IN PARADISE
By: hopeles_romantic
3/7/2008

I have stepped upon the ancient isle of Italy.
I have seen it's sunken city of Venice, and climbed it's leaning tower of Pisa.
I have stood upon the frozen tundra of Alaska and seen the sky a fire with the wonderous
colors of the northern lights.
I have watched the sun rise over the land of the morning calm in Korea, and the land
of the rising sun in Japan.
And I have watched that same sun slowly descend and extinguish itself into the beautiful
blue ocean from the black sand beaches on Hawaii.
And I have seen that same sun rise again out of the crystal clear emerald waters lighting the white sandy beaches of Florida.
I have visited museums throughout the world and seen beautiful art from the greats of all time that will bring a smile to your face or a tear to your eye.
And I have stood a top Virginia mountains that seem to go on forever rolling into a sea of beauty that would make anyone sigh.
I have veiwed mirrored lakes so majestic that you honestly can't tell where the lake ends and heaven begins.
Oh and I have made the time and watched many sunrises, of so many colors, shades of purple,yellow, orange, red and blue.
But of all the beauty in all the world none has brought me as much pleasure as gazing at
your angelic face and peering into your beautiful blue eyes.
After a lifetime of looking, and searching the world over, I have found the beauty of paradise in you.
YOU ARE TRULY MY PARADISE!

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 13, 2008

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    Wow, sounds like you really move around. I always wanted to do that, but never quite made it (not yet anyway). I like the style of this piece and enjoyed it.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    beautiful

    You have such a way with words.They have painted a beautiful picture in the mind of the reader.I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Blessings to you.
    ~Angel-anne~


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 6, 2008

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    Wow great words in this. Plus so describeing of everything. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. ...<33... SJ


  • Luckintheshadows
    June 19, 2008

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    breathtaking imagery!!! im actually speechless...all I can say is WOW!!!!

    Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of master-penmanship, and for entering my contest,


    Luck.


  • Erotik Rose silver member
    June 17, 2008

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    I never been to any of these places but I know they are wonderful and wouldn't mind seeing a few of them, thank you for entering the contest and good luck.

  • piccola silver member
    June 10, 2008
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    very visual. Someone is very fortunate to have another feel this way. Thank you for entering


  • Kari gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    There are a few things that need changing in this piece but other then that this is a very touching, and loving piece.
    Thanks for your entry


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 5, 2008
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    What a way to find paradise...Lovely poem. Good luck in my contest ~Sie


  • wolfpuppy
    June 3, 2008
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    wow deep


  • azlyn gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Oh my this is a loving tribute! How blessed to find that paradise! Just a lovely write. Thank you so much and best of luck!


    Az


  • elmundopasa1
    April 2, 2008

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    wow. obvious meaning behind your words. very passionate and well written. a good flow as well. thanks for entering.

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