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Moonshine Still on Laughter Hill

HEART AND SOUL SONGS

MOONSHINE STILL ON LAUGHTER HILL
By: hopeles_romantic
3/8/2008

Well there I was a coming over the hill,
when I saw a flying saucer hovering over my still.
Well I had my trusty rifle so I wasn't gonna run.
Then I saw a little green man, at first there was only one.
Well I wasn't afraid and that's no surprise.
Like I said he was just a little man, not much in size.
So I extended a friendly gesture and I offered him a jug.
I knew he understood me when he brought out his own mug.
We sat and exchanged some stories about the finer things of life,
and he told me him and his buddies were just hiding from their wives.
Then it hit me that we were kinda the same. So I told him about my wife you know old
what's her name.
Then down beamed his leader he was big ugly and fat,
but I just had to chuckle at his boots and cowboy hat.
Well I began to wonder if the moonshine had a hold of me,
because I just couldn't believe what I began to see.
Line dancing aliens, dancing just above the trees.
So we had an old fashion ho down, we where up until dawn.
But when I passed out they must of got bored, because when I woke up they were gone.
Well I ran and told that paper, you know the one I mean.
And they paid me a lot of money to tell them what I'd seen.
Well you just wouldn't believe what you see in the back woods late at night.
When moonshine is your only warmth, and the stars your only light.
Kangaroos, elephants, and now aliens gathering around my still.
It's getting where you can't find no privacy up here on this hill.
Well I usually just come up here because I need to think,
but lately with all the company all we ever do is drink.
Now I really enjoyed the visit, and if you boys can hear me way up there.
I only got one message YOU ALL COME BACK YOU HEAR!

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  • misterfish
    June 28
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    HAHA! Really really funny. Thanks for entering!


  • jimek
    February 26
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    Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha

    Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha HA Ha Oh and Ha Ha


  • gigglesalot
    February 9
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    haha this was funny. thanks for entering!


  • honey bear
    February 3

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    a very funny write although i think you meant to put..life in this line stories about the finer things of lige,
    it did make me smile though, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this crazy write


  • crazymomma
    August 10, 2008
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    LMAO!!!! What a cute, funny and creative story. Did you hit the jug before you wrote this LOL? I loved the story and the imagery was great. Just one thing: in this line, "We sat and exchanged some stories about the finer things of lige," I think you probably meant life not lige. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • pattyann4500
    July 8, 2008

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    That was one of my most original stories for my contest. I did laugh a time or two, and I appreciate your entering this piece in my contest. Patricia


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 6, 2008

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    Amazing i loved the way this poem was wrote kinda reminded me of a landside :P good job. Good use of words. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. ..<3.. Shelly


  • LuminousKiss
    June 6, 2008

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    Hahaha Wow that was great. Despite a few typos and awkward rhyming in a couple places, it flowed nicely. And what an idea for a poem! lol! That was so funny.


  • my1lovewearsdiapers
    June 2, 2008

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    This is so cute, and I like the flow. It sounds like something my granddad used to tell. This is a really good piece of work. Thank you for the entry, and best of luck in my contest.


  • Erozay
    May 7, 2008
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    its good


  • daviscth silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    Now this is such a funny and well written poem. The imagery is awesome. Thanks so much for posting in my contest.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    April 6, 2008
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    Thats pretty cool

    and it did make me smile


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    A very funny write but I'm wondering what it has to do with the pic of the monkey on the toilet!

    best of luck yo you in the contest!

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