My love
As I stand here looking into your eyes
my heart melts and I know that I love you
You are my strength in the night
my will in the ultimate fight
my warmth when the sun doesn't shine
I am yours and you are mine.
I offer you these words to keep you safe
hold them close to your heart tonight
You are my love and that is true
all I offer is adoration of you
You are my dream, my lady in blue
all I can say is... I love you.
Author notes
Good luck and I hope it all works out for you...
A contest entry
- Make her smile... by Wolf Mistress.
900 points, ended May 4, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatever you like...
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A very nice write. I'm sure she'll love this. Good luck ^_^
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Wonderful love poem...sends a flutter to the heart...
Az
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So sweet! I love it
So beautifully writen. Great write 
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that was sooo beautiful!! i love poems about love sooo much, especially how the love makes them soo strong and gives them strength and such. i love love poems! lolz. that was really really amazing and sooooo beautiful!!!!!
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this is just really great brother... It brought tears to my eyes... So beautiful.. Your words would bring a smile to the hardest of hearts...
great write ..
I really loved it..
Great write.. Peace to you, Jetleena
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this is beutiful, my big bro, is a pro. i really love it, and i hope you win.
KNIGHT TIME
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This my brother is beautiful!!! What a great job you did on this one!!! One can feel the love in your words here!!
Best of luck in this contest!!!
and love
Nyetta
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