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the choice

loving him and being with you
is like eros to cyclops
beauty to beast
sincerity to stupidity
making love to him is fireworks
sleeping with you is degrading
with him i feel cherished
with you i feel regret
how can two be so different
sadness with one
happiness with the other
why should i be in pain
when i can have love
why stay with somoene that harms me
when i can be with someone that adores me
staying with someone that uses me
and wanting someone that craves me
with one makes me feel useless
another makes me feel like a woman
why do this to myself
stuck in a situation i cant get out of
longing to to be in another
not a descision of choice but finding a way to get out
to get away from one
to be with another  

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  • Tarja
    April 1, 2008

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    I have never been in a situation like that before but I can imagine it's not easy... is this personal? Well either way.. it was very powerful and well written.. your emotions were expressed so deeply. Great job, hon.

  • Cwm
    April 1, 2008

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    Yeah this so frustrating... I've been in this situation before and have always been able to eventually get out of it, and have it resolved, I wish you the best. *hugs*


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Why others do live with some that harm them.. hmm, I think it starts off good maybe, and then one takes one for granite or something.. and it's hard to remain a level of love unless two sides are working towards the same goal. Wish you brighter days, peace.


    -Timothy aka poeticweaver