Her words are proving
to be worthless against his heart.
She's not making sense anymore
he doesn't understand
all the walls she's thrown up
or why she put them
back up against him.
She's sliding back to
what she always knew.
She's hitting another
railroad crossing.
Trains are passing at light speed
and she's missing her exit lane
[She'll be going on some new excursions now]
She's driving down highways
to escape everything crashing down on her.
But she's going just as fast
trying to find a new exit ramp
to move around this new detour sign.
Every piece of what was
supposed to be right
is now under severe construction
and if she tries to pass through
it'll be rocky and confusing.
She'll only have to back track
and go around again.
[She doesn't have the time
to walk away anymore]
She's putting her heart into this
but she's wondering
if it'lll be worth it in the end.
It's only an empty sky
filled with illuminating lights
and cities surrounded by mountains.
Is her heart ready
to take a leap and jump head on.
Fall head over combat boots
[forever in love]with him
[wait baby, she's already there]
But this is his battle to win.
She feels helpless and afraid;
afraid that she'll only get lost
trying to work out all they are.
But baby she's standing in front of him
[asking him to love her]
but does it really mean anything anymore?
[and that's all she has to give]
3-26-08
Author notes
When these three words become routine
that's the end of you and me.
we're not supposed to be together because of too many complications, yet he still loves me. but it feels like it's way too "forbidden" to ever be right.
let me know what you think
♥©
WishMeAway--x
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love, What Cannot Be Touched With Anything But Words by Momma Cupcake.
650 points, ended April 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"Her words are proving
to be worthless against his heart."
Ouch.
I can relate though.
I can see every girl driving out on the highway trying to get away.
You're piece is very universal and I like that :]
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It's just that every person can relate to this as you said.
idk, this helped me get out a lot of emotion and anger and well, a ton of things. My god.
thanks for the comment sweetie.
♥
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Baby, this was amazing.
I feel rubbish. My dad doesn't want me to come to america. He thinks that it's too expensive && that I'm wasting my time.
But you are truly amazing. I might still come over? like holiday? Idk.
Baby, shit. Everything was great, until 10 minutes ago =\
Iloveyou
♥
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holiday for sure.
i need you here. things are getting bad with chad stupid hindal again. you won't be wasting time or money. America is an experience that has to be lived not looked at or drempt about.
we'll get it figured out.
i promise.
iloveyou.♥
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Can I just say that I love this?
"She's not making sense anymore
he doesn't understand
all the walls she's thrown up
or why she put them
back up against him.
She's sliding back to
what she always knew."
I really connect to those lines.
This is brilliant.
How I love you is never enough because of the emptiness and confusion behind it.
At least that is my outlook on this, I could be totally wrong.
GREAT WRITE!
Thank thank thank you for entering!
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im ver happy you liked it.
it makes me very happy you did.
and your
How I love you is never enough because of the emptiness and confusion behind it
totally true. if you dont mind i may just write that down. And I have these very big surrounding walls...keeping people out...not keeping anyone in really.
but i guess it's how you chose to look at it.
again thank you thank you for the comment.
happy judging.
♥.Love
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