I peek out from the brush...
there you are
so sweet and innocent
unknowing of what you will become
but a midnight snack
You looked like you need help?
whats wrong my dear, are you lost?
here....let me help you find your way
as i take you to the back of an alley.
finally, i will feast
I pick up your weak body
and slam you down on the ground
as your head cracks on the cement
spilling a pool of blood that stains my shoes
how dare you
i strip you of your identity
and your designer outfit
you belong to me now
we will have so much fun together
i pull out my knife
as the blade glimmers in the moonlight
i feel my body pulsating
fantizing about all the fun that i am going to have
this wont hurt a bit
i lean over your fragile body
and bite your neck
tasting your crimson life
as it drips off my lips.
i move my lips down your body
tracing every curve of your figure
i slide my tongue into your steaming hot pussy
as you try to move away with rebellion
stay still you little cunt
i slide my tongue deeper into your womanhood
moving my tongue around your huge clit
i grab it will my teeth and pull
ripping it out of you while hearing you scream in pain
i take my blade out
and make an incision from your breast
down to your bleeding pussy
then i rip you open, exposing your organs
they look so beautiful....
i can't take it anymore
you just keep getting me more excited
with every scream you make
with every look of pain on your face
i thrust my hard cock in your cunt
feeling your warm blood surround me
i continue to force myself in and out...in and out
feeling your pussy shatter under all the pressure
im going to cum baby
i slowly start to release myself in you
as i pick out your ripe organs
and devour them
letting the blood run down my arms
youre going cold and pale
the end is near, dont worry
but im afraid youre no fun anymore
so i have no use for you
its almost over
i pick up my blade again
and slide it across your neck
ripping open your jugular
completely draining you of life
i rip off your finger nails
using them like tooth picks
the night is still young,
to go find my next victim
so....do you have any friends?
Author notes
sorry this is so long, but i was having fun with it
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A contest entry
- ||[Erotic_Murder]|| by Synthetic-Nightmare.
1300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
IDK....tell me what you think?
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Excellent Job! Very moving and very graphic.
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Not gonna lie, this got me hot.
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Wow sting! This certainly has one! A superb piece, love the graphic imagery, painted great visuals. All the best in the contest with this
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Ouch he pulled out her thing with his teeth, gotta hurt! I'd would have liked to be a fly on the wall watching this murderer. I would have felt sick but strangely mesmerized. Ah I can picture someone doing this to a girl! Ah now I'm happy. Thanks for that!! Twisted write!
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I love your picture and my favorite part is the end.Its crazy. Using her finger nails for tooth picks. Awesome. Good Luck!
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HAHA
TO LONG??? ARE YOU FUCKIN SERIOUS???
i don't give a shit!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!
hell, i'd have sex with this killer in a heart-beat!!
O.O
i love everything about it,
the vivid descriptions of the sexual act AS WELL AS the act of butchery itself. You did an AWESOME job, and it was extremely hot.
Is it sick if i were to say this turned me on?
LOL. This contest has turned out to be quite a sucess so far, thanks so much for your entry. I had to much fun reading it
ESPECIALLY the ending
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