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Number Soup

Stranded in a room with a clock that won’t move,
Stuck in the harsh world of numbers,
The biting, bitter, barren state
Of number land.
Dark, dismal, dank,
As formulas pour from her mouth,
Spewing, spraying, spattering,
A mess of muck,
Caustic, callous,
Unfeeling, uncaring,
Too real, too tangible,
Yet unfathomable,
Stark, sickening,
Number soup,
Sloshing through my head,
Putrid poison,
Malevolent medicine,
Acrid numbers.

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  • CinematicInk
    April 1, 2008
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    Math, oh what a dismal thing.


  • Play Pretend.
    April 1, 2008
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    Please Put which option you used in your Authors Box.
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