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Being

love and wisdom
like  ocean and wave,
are one
wisdom is ocean`s hidden ground.
detached being,..
waiting for nothing..
love spreads out
simply be, wait and see!

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  • Keith Drew gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    A very enlighting poem, wisdom and love tapestried so very well together.
    Well done!


  • MargaretG
    April 6, 2008
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    Congratulations

    for your trophy on this fine poem. You point to the essential unity of all things, love and wisdom are aspects of it, and being allows us to see it.


    • joyful
      April 7, 2008
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      thank you very much Margaret and all the very best for you
      Ingrid


  • myrataal silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    Congratulations on a wondrous poem!

    I simply loved the brevity, the Love and the Wisdom in this poem! And the simplicity in the metaphors used.



    Myra


  • maa gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    Being ...
    sigh ... all the questions fall back into the ocean of consciousness ... that's the answer ...
    a wise verse springing from the source of experience ... so appeasing ... so simple ...
    yes ...

    thank you from my heart,
    maa

    • joyful
      April 6, 2008

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      maa

      dear marion,
      thank you so much for this bronce trophy. I never expected that, as my english is really not so good. I just intended to contribute with a few lines, as I thought this question is fascinating. So thank you very much again
      Ingrid


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    April 2, 2008

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    So true, Ingrid. To be enlightened is simply to be. Yet most of us cannot see our being because we are not here and now. We are the Light by which we are enlightened. To be and shine brightly, clear of desire and fruitless thought, that is the key.

    So good to see a piece by you here.

    Be ever blessed and bright,

    Rahad


    • joyful
      April 7, 2008
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      dear rahad,
      thank you very much for your encouraging comment and for being

      with my best wishes Ingrid

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