Tranquility
Beautiful jazz romantically playing,
Soul of a women barren in birth
Of lost trust. She must be cherished
In knock out beauty perfume smelling
In peruse me. If I could take her
Emotions and run to the ocean
I would tell god take them give them
To some one who deserves it.
Inspiration of many
Beating drums
As she Honolulu her smile.
I will just drink tranquility
Let her kill me in desires
Afterwards ask her
Do she love me
One side is a angel
Life gave birth to
Her through build up Satan.
Come naked with the mountains
Come to terms with rebirth
Let some one else be strong for once
I feel the contractions in
Seconds
I am here
You gorgeous Vixen.
Author notes
Tranquility
You have me emotional
A contest entry
- Am I F***en Loved by theredcatjazzoflove.
450 points, ended April 1, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tranquility
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i love this
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thank you
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Very Nice
Nice calm and tranquil. "BOO"
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thanks MR.
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i loved this hon i think you said half of what is needed i think you did a very great job as always penning this
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i so love you so much i hope to hear from you soon
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Very nice. So definately showed your love for your lady here. I really enjoyed this. Best of luck in the contest.
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thank you Maurice
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