The voices in my head wont go away,
They tell me things i dont want to hear.
Consistantly yelling night and day,
The outcome is what i fear.
I snap one day,
They seem to make sense.
I do what they say,
My body going tense.
I found the victim with pretty blonde hair,
I twitch with excitement as i plan out what to do.
I wait in the shadows for her so unaware,
My weapon a shortblade knife with a handle of bamboo.
No one around,
Darkness concealing me.
She walks on down,
I scream like a banshee.
She turns as i collide with her,
Throwing her hands up in self-defense.
I cant see the darkness left my eyes in a blur,
My first attack was just false pretense.
But while she is trying to block that,
I can get her with a real blow.
We both clash with competitive combat,
while her death becomes known.
I knock her down,
She's out cold.
I get up, my shoe catching on her gown,
It rips all the way up, what a sight to behold!
I bend back down running my blade back and forth,
My heart beats faster i start to get hard.
I long for more and more,
I get deeper since she has no guard.
The blade cuts deep the blood runs smooth,
The skin separates while the flesh is shown.
I cut farther and deeper all the way through,
Until i can go no farther for i have hit the bone.
She starts to wake up i punch her in the face,
She screams and clenches her leg.
I backhand her one good time to slow the pace,
Her face cracks like the shell of an egg.
I move to her chest,
The feeling so warm.
Her soft firm breasts,
Causing my pants to preform.
I slowly cut into the torso with ease,
The flesh peeling away with out struggle.
The blood flowing like strong seas,
Brushing away any unwanted rubble.
This goes on all night,
Making sure she stays alive.
I'll problably let her go, i just might,
But i doubt it this feeling has revived,
My soul wants more and more,
I dont want this day to end.
I'll probably take her home and close the door,
And forever be her special friend.
Author notes
i just made this up in school like 20 minutes ago. Just for future info.
A contest entry
- ||[Erotic_Murder]|| by Synthetic-Nightmare.
1300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
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Great job!!!
nothing more to say!!
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ok.............
I have to say ummmmm jordan is right creepy, and just a little sick but Good luck!!!!
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OK. It's creepy baby even though it's for a contest. So if they are lookin for creepy I think you would win. Good luck baby.
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Great Write! I love how you call yourself her "special friend" Beautifully written! Keep up the great work.
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The background really is a mismatch...lol. love the write, superbly done, fab! Good luck in the contest with it
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HA!
you wrote this in 20 minutes??
It's fuckin AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH YAY! *dances*
i friggen love this, hot as hell.....
and it was chillingly gripping, making the reader WANT to continue. Very well done,
i love the darkness and of course i have to say this,
BUT THE RUGRATS BACKGROUND MADE ME LAUGH!
haha, what a contradiction ^_^
lol, i remeber when i used to watch that show all the time. But you know what?
I STILL, to this day (and i'm 19 btw) watch Clifford the Big Red DOg. haha
THanks for your entry
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