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Is There World Enough For Me?

See that sky?
I reach that far.
I transgress the bar!
Watch me defy.
See the clouds?
My head's in them.
I'd ride the Lem!
My words enshroud.
See that color?
I'm that vivacious.
I use words like loquacious!
I'm kind of a muller.

Point blank:
I'm swank.

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  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    April 2
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    loquatious..... 1. Common misspelling of loquacious. "See hat color" I believe should be 'See that color'. I found your rhyme pattern to be interesting and loved your closing, "Point blank: I'm swank." thanks for entering and good luck in the contest