I remember meeting Duff, outside
Her house on irwell, with a cigarette
Me too busy bleeding to decide
Anything about some girl I'd met
And so for months I missed out on the things
I've grown to understand as "simply Duff"
And "Duffisms", and the smile she brings
and loads, and loads, and loads of other stuff
So Duff, my friend, shine on you crazy diamond
Shine so bright they'll see you on the moon
(and though I cannot find a rhyme for diamond
I hope this poem brightens up your mood)
I'm certain that I'll never get enough
Of the crazy rollercoaster, Hannah Duff.
Author notes
A tribute to my good friend Hannah Duff. She's a legend.
A contest entry
- just about anything :) by nobodys-girl.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 56 entries
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300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 8 entries
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good luck
i like that, it flows and rhymes and rhyming things are cool XD -
wow. that was intense. reading this, it tells a story, unlike most of the poems entered in this contest. many of the poems express love. well, i definately like this, and that may be putting it a little mildly. You use "duffisms." i like that. im guessing its something hannah duff might do? well, anyway, i can't say much more. good luck and good write
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read my rules there is something you must write in your author notes
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aww this is so sweet and amazing, i hope your friend Hannah has read this poem! Good luck in the contest, I can tell this a personal poem and I enjoyed being sort of let in in your life
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This is a really great write, the rhyme is really free and effective. I love poems like this that tell a story in a round about sort of way!
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i love reading about friendship. it's amazing how close people can be and the kind of love that friends share. your poem showed this all very well. thankyou so very much for entering my contest and best of luck!!!
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Good friends are so hard to find, and writing such a lovely poem for your friend surely must have put a smile on her face! I hope you enjoy this contest and that you will get a shiny throphy for this lovely penned piece. All the best then, hope to read some more of your fantastic work soon!
Lovies
Becks
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