while I stroll down the pathways,
suddenly a thick darkness stripe encompassed me for a while.
The visibility ahead is really very poor
and my feet decided not to move further in cold
Suddenly a bright light flashed before me
showering in me many rays of hopes.
I saw bouts of snow flowing down the hills
and the morning sunlight pumping golden sheen
on the greenery spread all around.
Then I got a strong hope rekindled in me.
A voice from the high skies --told me in sequence
"Nothing is impossible to human
except to keep idle for hours together"
I once again started journey with desires sprouting afresh
with renewed energy vitalizing my nerves all along.
I am neither lost in the track nor placed at the least state in race
OH! great !! I am one among the credited six finalists that came to the fore.
Author notes
USE BOTH PROMPT (1) AND (2) TO WRITE YOUR (1)POEM
A contest entry
- 10,000 POINT - 8 HOUR - 1st ANNUAL ROADDOG INTERNATIONL BLITZ POETRY CONTEST - 10,000 POINTS - PLEASE FOLKS REMEMBER IT IS APRIL FOOLS DAY by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended April 2, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The humor blends so well with this great write
Yet nature flows
Good Luck in the contest
Julie aka Reptile Lady
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very good write and a refreshing bit of very well penned dry humor, quite witty, I enjoyed the read Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
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