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Sweet Destiny

You are my fallen star,
My waking sun,
My beautiful niece,
One thing to add,





You're amazing xx

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Hey sorry I don't have a lot of time and am in a very negative mood but I love you so here

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  • aeolia
    April 7, 2008

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    This is really sweet... a bit short and could use some elabouration, but it's a good start. Plus "waking sun" is one of my favourite phrases, so I loved that bit.

    -Cristina


  • Lady Australis silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    aww thankyou
    i love you auntie


  • crimsondew
    April 1, 2008
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    Short, still beautiful....