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set a stone down for me

 
 
 
 
 
to measure the weight
of hollowed stones
we count the rattle
of teeth in a hungry street
of mind,
 
where half-bitten words
taste better
for the end never comes.
 
 
it never comes though
we walk our tongues endless,

 

soles held to roof of mouth
 
and the careful press
of quiet ash,
 
all to swallow movements
from the brightest shadows,
the ones that open alleyways
or close them as we depart.
 

 

 

slowly we build ours maps,
each crossroad and cul-de-sac
and we grow like an empty
city of poems. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    can we fill in the blanks?? a bit like dot to dot poetry?? i wonder...

    this is good Kate, Suzi is right, you took the prompt and ran with it... well done and many many thanks for entering my contest

    G.x


  • Heart Sutra
    April 6, 2008

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    This is cool and I can see it clearly in my mind. You always have a way with words Kate.

    Good luck in the contest.


  • Fug-azi
    April 1, 2008
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  • Suzanne Dia
    April 1, 2008

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    I really really like what you did with this prompt. This is outside of the box, and that's why it is so good (aside from your gift with language.)

    I like having an empty city of poems out there. It means there is hope for all of us, at least that's how I see it.

    Isn't it true, though, that we can't just wait..we waggle those words onto the pavement until they are squashed, when sometimes just waiting for the right time would prevent the massacre.

    Hm, anyway, lol.

    Nice work, Kate.

  • Rowan gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    "and we grow like an empty
    city of poems"
    I loved that line, I think it could end there.
    This was a perfect take, metaphorically, and poetically.


    • EvilKate
      April 1, 2008
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      I agree - I'd been eyeing it myself for execution, axe in hand ... just wanted an hour between, in case the governor called.

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