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Wishful thinking

Missing image




life's choices at his fingertips,
his decisions crystal-clear

 

pouring  numbness slowly,

breathing her intoxication  

 

he succumbs

to the pleasure of oblivion


through a haze of staleness

another day dawns

retracing yesterday

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Whisper Mckee
    April 2, 2008
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    Thanks foe entering

  • Dana rose
    April 1, 2008
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    very touching i love it


  • Ithica silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    Lost his nerve methinks? Sad think with that bent they get around to it... eventually! Chilling!!!