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Canvas { HM }

Missing image

Surrendering abandonment bathed trials of gold,

Horizons raised in the scriptures,

Unfurling pages bound natures tapestry of word ,

Sunlit scopes,

River within the clouds,

Paved a dream.

 

Crystallized thoughts,

Once frozen,

timed within warp,

Interlacing era,

Freedoms passage way,

Suspended, now flows.

 

 

 

 

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Artist Marc Adams

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 4, 2008

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    Reptile Lady

    beautiful write Did a great job with it congrats on the greenie trophy.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    April 2, 2008

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    beautiful penned verse of poetic brevity, "Unfurling pages bound natures tapestry of word," I really liked that line, well done

    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest

  • Nighttime angel
    April 2, 2008

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    wow this is such a beautiful poem mum, the words flows so effortlessly.. I love the last stanza so much..

    fantastic job with the picture prompt..

    good luck

    kat


  • storiesuntold gold member
    April 2, 2008
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    This is beautiful

    Indeed with such vision and love the freedom of ones soul speaks in volume here .


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    Oh what rich imagery you have used to pain this picture into words that are so powerful!! Such a feeling of deep hurt in this that is completely uplifted by the hope in this piece!
    Just lovely hun
    xx


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 1, 2008

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    Really beautiful words here Julie. Very very descriptive. Indeed it is a magnificent entry and should go far in this competition.

    Love always
    Wayne Leon


  • aboomer silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    Beautiful wording to go with that beautiful picture! Great entry - best of luck in the contest!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    Beautiful Picture---Beautiful words!! Best of luck in the contest!

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