Canvas { HM }

Surrendering abandonment bathed trials of gold,

Horizons raised in the scriptures,

Unfurling pages bound natures tapestry of word ,

Sunlit scopes,

River within the clouds,

Paved a dream.

Crystallized thoughts,

Once frozen,

timed within warp,

Interlacing era,

Freedoms passage way,

Suspended, now flows.

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Artist Marc Adams

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RedwingSpirit
April 4, 2008

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Reptile Lady
beautiful write Did a great job with it congrats on the greenie trophy.
Roaddog Wolf
April 2, 2008

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beautiful penned verse of poetic brevity, "Unfurling pages bound natures tapestry of word," I really liked that line, well done

thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
- Reptile Lady
  April 2, 2008
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  Thank you for the HM
  xx
Nighttime angel
April 2, 2008

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wow this is such a beautiful poem mum, the words flows so effortlessly.. I love the last stanza so much..

fantastic job with the picture prompt..

good luck

kat
storiesuntold
April 2, 2008
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This is beautiful
Indeed with such vision and love the freedom of ones soul speaks in volume here .
kiwigirljacks
April 2, 2008

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Oh what rich imagery you have used to pain this picture into words that are so powerful!! Such a feeling of deep hurt in this that is completely uplifted by the hope in this piece!
Just lovely hun
xx
Wayne Leon Learmond
April 1, 2008

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Really beautiful words here Julie. Very very descriptive. Indeed it is a magnificent entry and should go far in this competition.

Love always
Wayne Leon
aboomer
April 1, 2008
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Beautiful wording to go with that beautiful picture! Great entry - best of luck in the contest!
BuriedTreasures
April 1, 2008

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Beautiful Picture---Beautiful words!! Best of luck in the contest!