Hued mist fixing colors
Sylvan clouds inching forward
Flowery shade over sun
From where I am
This world in a pause.
I look up to you
And the breeze on my face
moves to play on, in me
April songs.
A contest entry
- Another love poem contest , see what you can do by Eternal-Dreamer.
600 points, ended April 2, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
for the 1st april
Comments
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The beauty of love...soft flow and beutiful imagery...the ending is excellent...well done.
Best to you!
mystic
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a short but emotional poem with very strong imagry very well writen, thank you for entering


