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Play on

Hued mist fixing colors
Sylvan clouds inching forward
Flowery shade over sun
From where I am
This world in a pause.
I look up to you
And the breeze on my face
moves to play on, in me
April songs.

A contest entry

for the 1st april

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    The beauty of love...soft flow and beutiful imagery...the ending is excellent...well done.
    Best to you!
    mystic


  • Eternal-Dreamer
    April 2, 2008
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    a short but emotional poem with very strong imagry very well writen, thank you for entering