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Inspired Reality

The sun melts away
Broken dreams of shattered ice,
Creating rivers of life
That flow throughout my world.

Give me the sky as a page,
And clouds as my ink,
My imagination, my pen,
My words.
My sunlight.
Give me the sky and my words will enchant you.

The thoughts trickle
As melted snow from leaves,
Raining down to the ground,
Where images create vibrance and color.
Where sunrise is glorious.
Where my dreams come to life.
My thoughts,
My reality.

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Inspired by a photo by Marc Adamus

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    April 2, 2008
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    You don't need to be given the sky to enchant us with your words, you do a fine job of doing that anyway and besides the sky is free it belongs to everyone. Good write thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Nemo Forevermore
    April 1, 2008
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    oh dani, i envy your wonder!


  • bradsyourdad
    April 1, 2008
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    I wish I could write this well. I really really do.