Celestial Dream
Dionysus rock star.
Shook stars from his hair.
Now he has conversations with god.
I think god even scratches his head
The world found out you died.
You stopped the world for a moment and made it think.
Fame is over rated .
A contest entry
- I want your best! anything goes, Also hurry because i hate waiting! by urapns66.
350 points, ended April 1, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?, I am trying to get enough material together do you think I should publish a book?
Comments
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this is awesome! its just great i really liked the last few lines there towards the end: "I think god even scratches his head The world found out you died. You stopped the world for a moment and made it think. Fame is over rated ." that really pulls me into the write lol its these kinds of poems that i could read more of and still want more lol but it is really good! lol i need to keep commenting but i just want to keep reading it over and over lol thanks a lot! good luck!
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